By Ryan Hart 17 Jun, 2009
Very creative. You're good. Hope you take it positively but you could sharpen a few of those poems up if you edited them before posting. Few problems with consistency, and spelling may not be THAT important to you, but if it's going to be your title it is. I believe you meant folly instead of falley. As far as I know that's not a word, and unfortunately, not the only spelling mistake.
Keep writing! You have lots of talent, you just need to edit your poetry a few times, make sure it's consistent the whole way through. You're creativity is inspiring, thanks for the ideas!

By Amanda Brunk 10 Jun, 2009
I’m in love with your poetry
it’s raw and beautiful

By Megan Meyers 20 May, 2009
I like your honesty

By Megan Meyers 20 May, 2009
Nice words, very truthful..

By Mark Hall 18 May, 2009
Nice one man.